This is my favourite piece of writing because it is very detailed, and I think it paints a picture in your head when you are reading it. For me, it was really hard to find all the information and put it all into my own words, and I found it easier to write the diet paragraph because the flying fish technically eat everything. I really enjoyed publishing it because I like using fonts and different layouts. if i ever did this again i would probably split the gliding ability paragraph so that it's not as long. I hope you enjoy reading my flying fish report. 
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Wednesday, October 24, 2018
My Report
This is my favourite piece of writing because it is very detailed, and I think it paints a picture in your head when you are reading it. For me, it was really hard to find all the information and put it all into my own words, and I found it easier to write the diet paragraph because the flying fish technically eat everything. I really enjoyed publishing it because I like using fonts and different layouts. if i ever did this again i would probably split the gliding ability paragraph so that it's not as long. I hope you enjoy reading my flying fish report. 
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Hi Bella,
ReplyDeleteYou have found some fantastic information about the Flying Fish! I love the image you have used t the top and how you have used sub-headings in your report. Next time, don't forget to have capital letters to start your sentences, maybe you could use the Hemingway App that we used at WBS to give you some further support.