Thursday, November 21, 2019

wk-6 quick write😜

This week I complete a 20 min quick write and I just wanted to share it because I thought it was cool.
its a bit rough because I haven't had time to edit or recraft, but I still wanted to post it. (:

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Quick  write - 20 mins=2 writes
  • 543 words
Stiffly I got up off the rotten floor boards. I hear birds and leaves rustling. My sleep out wasn't the best considering It had been here for over a month. Each day that passes everything slowly gets eaten by the forest, including myself. I trudge out onto the moss and wet leaves. Long twindly trees surround me covered in blankets of leaves. The bus I was sleeping in had a dark red strip of paint around the bottom with broken windows and a cream colored body. I kept  walking out to go for my morning stroll checking if there is any sign of people nearby. All of a sudden a wizard pops out of thin air. I can grant you three wishes but you must have a pure heart first so complete these tasks successfully and you get three wishes. I scream at the top of my lungs. Gasping for air I look the aged wizard up and down. He was wearing an old purple coat, with mud covering it and 3 shiny silver buttons coming down the middle. My breath starts to slow down.  A Neon yellow hat sat on top of his head. As his gray beard hangs on his face, he says I can grant you three wishes but you must have a pure heart first. He takes a glance of my unwashed body and knotted hair then counties . “ complete these tasks successfully and you get any three wishes, but you must choose carefully”. I take a step back and start to think its a dream. Slap, my face stings now but I still haven't woken up. Timidly I say okay, stand up straight and look him right in the eye. ‘You promise the wishes work?”. No they dont work im just a normal person that can come out of thin air”. Wait what” Im just being sarcastic I promise they work” I Nod my head then say” im ready for the first test”. “Okay great” he gestures towards the tree and says jump in it “. Unsure i walk to the tree and touch it it's hard how am i supposed to jump in it. Three wishes or not? Askes the wizard. I look back, take a few steps, then I sprint into the tree as hard as I can and take a leap of faith. Black noise fills my brain. Everything is spinning, and i feel numb. My ears start to pick up the wizard talkin to me, that's definitely trusting, and trustworthy tiked of. “I just jumped into a tree for no reason” i manage to pronounce. “No its for your wishes”. My vision starts to come back and i decide surely the second test can be as hard. I barely stand up then he says tell me you favourite cartoon. “Seriously?’. WHY would i be lying, this is important” says the wizard. Umm probably sponge bob” oh my god you are literal perfection no need for the third test you have passed successfully, well done. Now what are your three wishes. I wish to be home and i wish for endless macaroni cheese, andddd for abs. Boom I wake up at home and i have a six pack wwoooooooooo. What what about my macaroni cheese?

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